Friday, 1 August 2008

Stories

We have been learning about narrative writing.

These stories have characters (who), settings (where), a beginning, a middle (where a problem might happen) and and end (where the problem gets fixed).

We used Kidpix to create some pictures to help us plan out our stories.  Here are a few of them.




The mermaid and the witch.
By Lynley

The mermaid and the witch are under the sea.

The witch made a spell of 7 bits of fire so she can get the treasure.

The wizard comes and does a spell to get the treasure back from the witch.


The bridge
by Bethany
There were some people walking on the bridge.

They didn't see that there was a snake behind them.

A knight came to save them.  He killed the snake.  The people said thank you to the knight.


The Alien.
by Courage
The alien was on his planet up in space.

The fireball was going to explode the alien.

The spaceman saved the alien.  He takes the alien up in his spaceship.  The fireball misses the alien.


3 comments:

Dillon-Roberts said...

Cool pictures guys! Ms D x

Heather said...

Hi Room 3

Hope you all had a fun filled holiday and got up to some mischief!
Wow! I'm impressed with your kidpix stories. WAY TO GO.

Anonymous said...

Hi room3 we love your pictures and your stories.
Love from room4