Friday, 22 August 2008

Our Natty Narratives!!


We are writing up a storm in Room 3!  We looked at some pictures  and used our imaginations to think up what might have happened and what might happen next!  We planned our stories, making sure there was a beginning, middle and end.

Here are some of our masterpeices!

 The firemen saved the day.

 Once upon a time there lived an old lady and a cat in a house.

One night the old lady was in bed.  The candle fell over because the cat jumped up on the duchess and the candle fell over. 

The candle fell on the ground and that’s how the fire started. 

The old lady ran to the phone.  The old lady rang the fire people.  The fire people came to help the old lady.

The cat died because it was near the candle.  They squirted water on the house and got her out.

The old lady was very sad.

 By Natasha

The fire.

 A lady at a house lit a candle and the flame got bigger and bigger and bigger.  Fire men came to rescue the lady.

By Sarah

The Fire

The lady saw a fire in her house.  The candle had dropped in her house.  The lady was trapped in the house.  The firemen came to save her.

 By Bethany


The star in the sky at night.

 Reyana, Bella and Miriana were at a house.   A star came alive.  Another star came alive and sang a song.  The kids were scared of the star.  They got their Mum and they told their Mum to sing it a song.  The star went back to sleep.

 By Reyana

The Forest

 Reyana, Jack and Lynley  were walking along in the forest.  A witch came along and stole Lynley’s treasure.    The asked the wizard to use his wand.  They did a spell to get the treasure back from the witch.  Reyana and Jack got the treasure from the witch.

By Lynley 

5 comments:

Heather said...

Gosh Room 3 you are all becoming great writers. Fantastic stories you guys.

Dillon-Roberts said...

I love these stories Room 3! Thank goodness for the firemen! Ms D x

Bridget K said...

Thank you for sharing some of your natty narratives with us!
They are so good I think I might just grab my pencil and get writing...

Mum Hodgins said...

You are adorable Room Three! I love the stories and especially love the dress up day photos. Keep up the great work guys!

Jules said...

Hi Room 3. What fab story writers you are. I hope we'll get to read some more soon, it's great seeing the awesome things you do ;) Julie